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RE: THE INK WELL WRITING CHALLENGE | SEASON 2 - Week 8 : The Red Handshake

in The Ink Well4 months ago (edited)

I like the start, so light-hearted and then taking the reader somewhere else. I found the description of the dream quite chilling and it certainly drew me into the story. I wonder if these two investigators have a future?

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Hello. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. I first started with mom, but then decided to let her recover and give the investigation to the daughter. Was hoping for that reaction to the dream. Yes, those two chose the right majors and vowed to return to school.

I appreciate your kind words. Take care, and have a good holiday. See you in January.

Was hoping for that reaction to the dream.

That worked well, then - very effective piece of writing.